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Okay, so I’m writing a story about a girl who lives in a huge orphanage, where everyone’s parents there had “died” in the same accident: a trade center explosion. The girl has a friend named Caleb who doesn’t live in the orphanage that takes her to school with him three days a week, out to eat, etc. The only reason she doesn’t live with his family, who were very close to she and her parents, is because the town passed a law saying that all children under 18 who were victim to the explosion had to be sent to the orphanage, or death would be the result. ( I know, strict town! :P ) So the girl and other kids in her orphanage try to find out what caused the explosion in the building and why they were held to living in the orphanage. Their main task is to break free from the awful place! The girl has many hardships, including Caleb beginning to date the worst girl at their school, causing the girl and him to break apart as friends, and the girl begins to lose hope in her mission- Okay, I’m afraid I can’t tell you anymore, because then I might see some copiers or something, and that would suck because this is a really original story! :P The only last thing I can say is that, along the way, the girl discovers that she has a twin sister. Like the storyline (at least, the stuff I’m safe with revealing?) Any suggestions?

Okay, for the second part of the question, these are the names I’ve decided on for the girl and her twin. Their last name is Stone, and these are their decided names so far:

Main girl: Haven Rae Stone
Twin: Hallie Rose Stone

I’m 100% sticking to the main girl’s name, no doubts, but the twin’s name I’m a bit iffy on. If you have any new suggestions, here are the guidelines:

-The first name MUST start with a hard H (e.g. hat) as opposed to a soft H (e.g. honor).
-The middle name MUST begin with an S.
-The first name must have TWO syllables, and the middle name must be ONE syllable.
-Please note that the last name is Stone, so it should sound good with that at the end.

Also, they both have peachy skin, freckles on their noses and cheeks, blond hair streaked with caramel brown, however “Haven”‘s hair is straight with side bangs and her eyes are dark brown, while “Hallie”‘s hair is wavy, her eyes are icy blue, and she is slightly taller than “Haven”. Haven is thirteen minutes older than Hallie.

In the story, they are currently both 13 and in the eighth grade.

Thanks! :D
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NOTICE!!!!!! I AM SO SORRY!!!!!! THE MIDDLE NAME NEEDS TO START WITH AN R, NOT AN S!!!!!!!! SUPER SORRY TOTAL MAJOR TYPO MAN I APOLOGIZE!!!!
I am 12 in the seventh grade, and if I get enough answers I might reveal more story line… but not all of it. I hope to finish and maybe share with friends and family ;)

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Answer by glutenfreeval
I love your story line! It sounds VERY interesting!!!! I definately like the name Haven but as for the name Hallie I don’t really care for it. Here are some other H name ideas.

Hannah
Hayley/Haylee/Haylie
Harley
Hadley

Good luck with your story!

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